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Chosing your profession For many people, is dificult to chose their profession. This occurs mainly because people generally think what they like can't be your profession. But in these days we have the internet, and a lot technologies that open new oportunites. Do you like travel? Why not do a site about theme? You begin in your city, and after you can travel and write for your site. Do you like singing? Or acting? Maybe you want to be comedian. You can use the yoube. Do you like speak about a lot of theme, or one specific theme, you can do a podcast. What I want say is, use technologies around you in your favour.

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Chosing your profession

For many people, it is dificult to choose their a profession. This occurs mainly because people generally think what they like can't be your their profession.

But in these days we have the internet, and a lot technologies that open (create) new opportunities.

Do you like to travel? Why not do (make) a site about it theme? You can begin in your city, and after you can travel and write for your site.

Do you like singing? Or acting? Maybe you want to be a comedian. You can use the youtube.

Do If you like to speak about a lot of themes (topics), or one specific theme (topic), you can do a podcast.

What I want say is, use technologies around you in your favour.

 

-Good job! In a few cases I put words in bold that would sound more natural (for example "create new opportunities" or "speak about different topics").

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