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Chinese foot bath Chinese people like massage feet, It’s good for health. If you haven’t conditions to massage feet, you could make feet bath use the hot water, that’s the same good for health. Specially when you take a cold ,you could make a feet bath until you sweating on your back, next day your body will be ok. I love make feet bath. My prescription is: hot water ,ginger, salt, white vinegar, milk and laptop. Put all of them in the water except laptop, then put my feet in the hot water with the filled condiment, wow, it’s so comfortable, then open my laptop enjoy my surfing.
19 มี.ค. 2013 เวลา 8:42
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Dear Angel,

English is not my first language, but I guess I can help you with some small details.

Below, there is the your text corrected as I expect is the best way to write with your own words:

 

Chinese feet bath

Chinese people like feet massage , It’s good for health. 

If you wouldn't have conditions to have a feet massage, you could make a feet bath using hot water, that does the same good for health.
Specially when you catch a cold ,you could make a feet bath until you start sweating on your back, next day your body will be ok.
I love making feet bath.
My prescription is: hot water, ginger, salt, white vinegar, milk and laptop.
Put all of them into the water except the laptop, then put my feet in the hot water filled with condiment, wow, it’s so comfortable! Then I open my laptop and I enjoy my surfing.

 

As a comment, I have already made a feet massage in China and it was very relaxing! I have never made a feet bath, but now I will, I just cannot forget in not to put the laptop into the water.   :)

21 มีนาคม 2013

Chinese Foot Bath
Chinese people like foot massages, It’s good for your health.
If you don't have the right ingredients for a foot bath, you can make a foot bath using only hot water, it's just as good for your health.
Especially when you have a cold ,you could have a foot bath until your back is sweating. The next day, your body will be ok.
I love having foot baths.
My prescription is: hot water, ginger, salt, white vinegar, milk and a laptop.
I put all of them in the water except the laptop, then put my feet in the hot water filled with the ingredients. Wow, it’s so comfortable! Then I open my laptop enjoy my surfing.

Haha I like this story! Good job! keep it up!  I also have had a foot massage.  At one point, they used tiny hammers to massage me. It was nice! Although, they put a bag of hot sand on me and it just burned a lot and felt terrible haha. That part was not enjoyable haha.  

23 มีนาคม 2013
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