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School is tiring... 처는 한생 이에요. 오늘 공부 했어요. 어체 일 에 갔어요. 시간 없어요.

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School is tiring...

처는(저는) 한생(학생) 이에요. 오늘 공부 했어요. 어체(어제) 일 에(일하러) 갔어요. 시간(이) 없어요.

I am a student

Today, I studied

I went to work yesterday.

I do not have time.

 

I wrote as I guessed from Korean sentences.

I think it is good way to get better correction if you write English version of your note as well.

 

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School is tiring...

처는 한생 이에요. 오늘 공부 했어요. 어체 일 에 갔어요. 시간 없어요.

 

저는 학생이에요. 오늘 공부했어요. 어제 일에 갔어요. 시간 없어요.

 

You did a good job. '띄어쓰기' - blank or space ? - is very difficult, so many native koreans also have faults with them. 

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School is tiring...

처 저는 한생 이에요. 오늘 공부 했어요. 어체(제) 일에 갔어요. 시간(이) 없어요.

your sentence may appear too awkward to native korean. because of many punctuation.

(In my opinion) 저는 한생이라고 합니다. 오늘은 공부를 하고 어제는 일에 갔습니다. 그래서(therefore) 시간이 부족합니다. 

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