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embarrassed life in beijing Since i rent a bigger room for RMB 2400 per month, my life becomes very embarrassed. Owing to the surpport from my girlfriend, i can pay for the down payment. But, i cann't save money at all as a "moonlight clan". Right now, i only pray for i can successfully receive the lawyer's license to get more pay. Besides, wish the law firm can give me the appropriate bonus for the first quarter of 2013. As Premier Li Keqiang said, talking the talk was not good as walking the walk. I always believe that we young man should try our best to have the capacity of living a better life.

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embarrassed life in beijing

Since i rented a bigger room for RMB 2400 per month, my life becomes has become very embarrassed embarrassing. Owing to Because of the support from my girlfriend, i can (now) pay for the down payment. But, i can't save money at all as a "moonlight clan". Right now, i only pray for that i can successfully receive the a lawyer's license to get more pay. Besides, I wish the law firm can give me the appropriate bonus for the first quarter of 2013.

As Premier Li Keqiang said, talking the talk was not as good as walking the walk. I always believe that we young man should try our best to have the capacity opportunity of living a better life.

 

Overall, Very good.  Just a few mistakes.

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