Search from various ภาษาอังกฤษ teachers...
Elena
Wings.... She was standing alone on the bridge and she was thinking….why is the life so hard? She had everything before, her feelings were so innocent, so clear…she loved and everything in this world was built in love for her! Her friends called her as an Angel because she was a bit naiv, very kind and helpful and the most important thing that she believed in miracles and fairy tails…she trusted people and expected the same from them. But the life showed another side , she met everything: betrayal, envy, pride, crime…why people do it? Why can not they live and enjoy their simple life? People want always something, car and house, job and money, good condition and delicious food, but they don’t think a lot about a moral world…she had a Love, but she lost it…he chose another way! She refused wings and became like all people. She lost her innocence with her wings… She was standing on the edge of the bridge, she wanted to fly….fly away from this cruel world…it began to rain and it was not clear she is crying or it is rain’s tears on her cheecks..she only felt pain in place where her wings were once….she thought if she jumps she will get her wings back and she will be an Angel again…she asked God for a help..she closed her eyes and imagined how she fall down to the water but suddenly she saw a God…God looked at her and told :”you don’t need wings to fly…look at you heart, you have a Love for this”…she stopped and thought, what does it mean??? Suddenly the phone rang, it was a message…a message from him :”Honey, I love you so much, I live you, I breath you”…she smiled, she felt her heart began to work faster, the blood became hoter, the breather became deeper…she felt that she wants to fly..she was flying…she was flying to him…
14 เม.ย. 2013 เวลา 19:32
การแก้ไข · 6

Wings....

She was standing alone on the bridge and she was thinking….why is the life so hard?

She had everything before, her feelings were so innocent, so clear. She loved everything and everything in this world was built in love for her!

Her friends saw her as an Angel because she was a bit naiv, very kind and helpful. The most important thing that she believed in were miracles and fairy tails.

She trusted people and expected the same from them. But the life showed her another side, she met everything: betrayal, envy, pride and crime - why do people do this?

Why can't they live and enjoy their simple life? People always want things, car and house, job and money, good conditions and delicious food, but they don’t think a lot about the moral aspect. She once had a Love, but she lost it; he chose another way! She refused wings and became like all people. She lost her innocence with her wings…

She was standing on the edge of the bridge, she wanted to fly, fly away from this cruel world. It began to rain and it was not clear whether she was crying or if it was rain drops on her cheecks. She only felt pain in the places where her wings once were. She thought if she jumped she would get her wings back and she will be an Angel again.

he asked God for a help and closed her eyes. She imagined how she would fall down into the water, but suddenly she saw a God. God looked at her and said :”you don’t need wings to fly, look at you heart, you have a Love for this”. She stopped and thought, what does it mean??? Suddenly, the phone rang, it was a message, a message from him :”Honey, I love you so much, I live you, I breath you”. She smiled, she felt her heart beginning to work faster, the blood became hotter, her breather became deeper. She felt as if she could fly. She was flying - she was flying to him.

14 เมษายน 2013
this story is not about God or trust to some things...it is about feelings, about a hope, about a desire...about our feelings which can make us so weak...and it is very important to understand in time who are you and what are you living for...
23 พฤษภาคม 2013
wow ..amazing story. yeh really life is very hard, some times we become frustrated, sad and depressed but u know that hard time teach us very important lesson about the life. we come near to the God, we feel the God. we get lesson that everything is in our heart ... because God lives in our heart. so don't be afraid, don't loose your patience just trust your self, trust your God. God is with u all the time either you remember or not. love humanity is the biggest religion and serve the people shud be our mission and objective of the life. don't expect just give the love then see ..life is so beautiful.
20 พฤษภาคม 2013
Oh my Great Philosopher !! At one point of time ..I felt u r writing this for me !! :)
19 เมษายน 2013

Wings....

She was standing alone on the bridge and she was thinking….why is the life so hard? She had everything before, her feelings were so innocent, so clear…she loved and everything in this world and felt that it was built in love for her! Her friends called her as an Angel because she was a bit naive, very kind and helpful and the most importantly thing that she believed in miracles and fairy tails…she trusted people and expected the same from them. But the life showed/had shown her another side , she met everything: betrayal, envy, pride, crime…why are people like this/this way do it? Why can they not not they live and enjoy their the simple life? People always want want always something, a car and house, a job and money, good conditions and delicious food, but they don’t think a lot about moralitya moral world…she had a Love, but she lost it…he chose another way!
She refused wings and became like everyone else all people. She lost her innocence with her wings…
She was standing on the edge of the bridge, she wanted to fly….fly away from this cruel world…it began to rain and it was not clear whether she was she is crying or it was is rain’s tears on her cheecks..she only felt pain in the place where her wings once were were once….she thought that if she jumped she would will get her wings back and she would will be an Angel again/once more…she asked God for a help..she closed her eyes and imagined how she would fall down into the water but suddenly she saw a God…God looked at her and said told :”you don’t need wings to fly…look into at your heart, you have a Lovethere for this”…she stopped and thought, what does it mean??? Suddenly the phone rang, it was a message…a message from him :”Honey, I love you so much, I live for you, I breath for you”…she smiled, she felt her heart begin to work/beat faster, the blood became hotter, her the breathing became deeper…she felt that she wanted to fly..she was flying…she was flying to him…

 

A very moving and courageous piece of work.  Well done!

14 เมษายน 2013
ต้องการความก้าวหน้าที่เร็วขึ้นหรือไม่
เข้าร่วมชุมชนแห่งการเรียนรู้และทดลองใช้แบบฝึกหัดฟรี!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!