The Computer Games

I love computer games when I was a little boy. The computer game It is a double blade edged sword.
The It is bad is if you used your most times to play all the time. the game, it's not good for your realy life. Because it will hurt your It may be bad for your health and the most important thing is the game an addiction for young people like opium can be very addictive. [However, there are studies suggesting that playing such games make them good fighter pilots.  They use a joystick in the cockpit to aim and fire.]

But the computer also have However, there is a good side too. You can make virtual friends online. 3 Three years ago, I have played a popular computer game called "World of Warcraft".  At that time, I meet met many friends on the online.__Some of them become my real friends in the realy life. They also taught teach me many knowledges things that I can't don't learn from my school teachers.
Now,Though I don't spend much times on these games anymore, any more, but my we are still friends and I also have kept in touch contact.

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