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jean
My profile in my CV I have great passion for hospitality industry, liked to contact and assist people with my cordial smile. The passion made me energetic all the time. I like to challenge myself by unusual experience. I have travelled and worked as waitress in New Zealand for one year. I have open mind and adventure spirit like westerner; I am modest and work hard like Asian.
19 พ.ค. 2013 เวลา 11:43
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My profile in my CV

I have a great passion for the hospitality industry, and I like liked to greet contact and assist people with my cordial smile. The My passion for people makes made me energetic all the time. I like to challenge myself with by unusual experiences. I have travelled and worked as a waitress in New Zealand for one year. I have an open mind and an adventurous adventure spirit like a westerner; I am modest and work hard like Asian.

 

Very good! 'greet' instead of 'contact' because greeting is positive, contact is just neutral. 

I changed to 'My passion for people', guessing, because there are many kinds of passion!

like is present tense, makes is present tense, adventurous is an adjective for spirit.

19 พฤษภาคม 2013
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