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Preparation for my English exam: Summary: Dawn of the age of the robot I have to write a summary of this text http://www.guardian.co.uk/business/2010/dec/30/futurologist-predicts-age-of-robots .I already did a summary, but can you help me with the grammar, and the sentences I wrote. Also it would be nice if you could look up the article and correct my text. Dawn of the age of the robot Robots will dominate the future. They will build an army of robots, and it will increase like the internet and the social media. Also they will have influence of our wars and daily life. Furthermore robots will replace workers, and create less work, and increase the rate of unemployment. Robots calculate faster as humans. Moreover they will create a new world of possibilities. But, Robots are already here, they could build whole buildings, and reduce the costs in the future. Today they assist language teachers at their work. People worry about the future, but we have to adapt to the conditions we will get, likewise in the past. The robotic technology can not be stopped. People have a bad picture of robots from the movies, but we are becoming more robotic every day. The questions, will the technology increase the development faster and faster, we will know in the future. Today we are bombed by tons of information and people get depressed and scary.
18 มิ.ย. 2013 เวลา 20:05
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I don't mean to be rude to Kevin, but there are further, albeit minor, corrections.
 

Dawn of the Age of the Robot

Robots will dominate the future. They will build an army of robots, and it will flourish like the internet and social media. Also, they will have influence over our wars and our daily lives (The second preposition shows that "wars" and "daily lives" are not related to each other). Furthermore, robots will replace workers, and (not joining independent clauses) create less work, and increase the unemployment rate (Better, shorter term). Robots calculate faster than humans can (This is already implied, but also, it has not been introduced yet). Moreover, they will create a new world of possibilities.

However, robots are already here. They can build entire (optional) buildings, thus reducing future costs (Once again, more consise and better wording), and they assist language teachers at their work. (Better to join similar sentences to avoid awkward wording). People worry about the future very vague, better to state exactly what it is) this, but we (Using first-person can be tricky) have to adapt to the (thse) new conditions we will get, just like as we have done likewise in the past (Repeating a lot of the same words). People have a bad perception of robots due to movies, but we are becoming more robotic every day. 

Regardless, advancements in robotic technology cannot be stopped. (Switched position to join common ideas) The question of is whether this technology will increase the rate of robot development of robots faster and faster, we will know in the future(Very awkward and repetitive wording) The answer to this will be known in the future. (Optional) Today, however, (show shifting of ideas) we are being (tense) bombed by tons of ("bombed" already implies large amount) false (depending on your ideas, this is what you might have had in mind) information, which causes fear among and people get depressed and scared


That's just my two cents, though the tenses and the commas are were in need of fixing. 

21 มิถุนายน 2013

Preparation for my English exam: Summary: Dawn of the age of the robot

I have to write a summary of this text http://www.guardian.co.uk/business/2010/dec/30/futurologist-predicts-age-of-robots .I already did a summary, but can you help me with the grammar, and the sentences I wrote. Also it would be nice if you could look up the article and correct my text.

Dawn of the Age of the Robot


Robots will dominate the future. They will build an army of robots, and it will flourish like the internet and the social media (no "the" because there are multiple social media platforms). Also, (comma after preposition) they will have influence over our wars and daily lives ("our" calls for plural). Furthermore, robots will replace workers, and create less work, and increase the rate of unemployment. Robots calculate faster than humans can. Moreover, they will create a new world of possibilities. However (don't start a sentence with "but"), robots are already here. They can build whole buildings, and reduce the costs in the future. Today, they assist language teachers at their work. People worry about the future, but we have to adapt to the new conditions we will get, just like we have done likewise in the past. The advancements in robotic technology cannot be stopped. People have a bad perception of robots due to from the movies, but we are becoming more robotic every day. The question of whether will the technology will increase the development of robots faster and faster, we will know in the future. Today, we are bombed by tons of information and people get depressed and scared. (the last sentence can be left out because it doesn't really relate to your paragraph.)

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