Get interested in your life

In this 18 year that im am Being 18 years old, I've seen a lot of things in this world. I've lived in most of my coutry's country's cities. One week in one, two months in another one, one year another and so on... What I've clarity clearly seen is that most of the humans are not using their brain. Humans are consuming themselves in drugs, marijuana, bad music, wrong values, pollution, sex and over all of that they are becoming empty dolls. They dont have a dream just living the life as if no ones cares. Their life have has been managed and consumed by working, using the interndt internet just for chatting and to have virtual sex: "sexting". im I strongly disagree with that kind of life. Humans have to be free. It's not that dont you you don't have to work, but they there are more things to do after work than only just sit down in front of your computer..why dont you go for a walk in the park, take your children out, play with them, I know you might be tired after work, if it's for that buy a pair of binoculars and get interested for your environment. Overturn rocks, watch see what is hode hides under them, stare at the stars sometimes. Additionally always carry with you a pencil and a white paper. Any crazy thoughts you have, write them down. Maybe that will be the next idea which will change the world. Only your memories are going to keep on stay with you when you pass away.

The blue is corrections, the yellow highlight is things I added in for it to make more sense. I completely agree with you on this, and I wish there were more people who had a mind set like you so they could influence others. Great job!!