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Chasing the Sun "If you want to chase and catch the sun, first you must work hard and make it run". This is a quote which appear as a light in my mind as a big torch in darkness it keeps me on the learning and into the working.

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Chasing the Sun

"If you want to chase and catch the sun, first you must work hard, and make it run".

This is a quote which appeared like a light in my mind, as a big torch in the darkness; it keeps me on the learning and into the working.


(I like that you're being poetic! It's also common to say "a light in the dark" and "it just appeared/flashed in my mind" or "it appeared like a flash in my mind"

 

If you're being poetic in the phrase above you can ignore my following comment :)

I don't know...there is something about this sentence that sounds really odd to me. We generally say "it keeps me on the ball" (keeps me on task/schedule for getting things done) and "I'm into my work" (I'm interested in my work)

 

Wow this is well written :) great job! I'm a long distance runner so I really love the image you've painted here with your quote! It's motivating! Keep at it!

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