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Henry N. Brown I’m a world’s citizen, but I was born in Bath in July 16 of 1921, when my second eye was knitted by Alice. My name is Henry N. Brown and I’m a Teddy Bear. But I’m not common teddy bear, Alice put a secret inside of me, that secret it´s called “love”. And make me special, different. Now I have 80 year and I’m not the prefer children toy anymore. I let convince myself by my editor to tell my story. Through this teddy bear innocent eyes, we assist to the events most significant of the 20th century: the American dream, the second world war, the hippy movement up to now. From the hand of this incredible witness, a Teddy Bear able to see and to hear, and his several owners, we traveled to Europe, We'll meet all people that he loved and have had marked in his long live. Adults, Children, all of them surrender to his tender and charm look and his incredible capacity to listen, his presence is enough to make us feel relax, wisdom, friendship and comfort .

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Henry N. Brown

 

I’m A world’s citizen of the world I am. , but I was Born in Bath in July 16 of the year, 1921.  July 16th to be precise. when My second eye was knitted by Alice. My name is Henry N. Brown and I’m a Teddy Bear. But I’m Not any not common teddy bear, for Alice had put a secret [I prefer "gift"] inside of in me. that secret it´s It is called "love". And This makes me very very special, and different. Now I have 80 Eighty years had gone by and I’m not longer the toy the prefer children toy prefer anymore. I let convinced myself by my editor to tell my story.

"Through the innocent eyes of this teddy bear, it had witnessed innocent eyes, we assist to the events most significant events of the 20th Century: the realization of the American dream, the Second World War, the hippy Hippie Movement, etc up to now.

From the hand of this incredible witness, a This Teddy Bear was able to see and to hear., and Thanks to his several owners, we traveled who took him to Europe. We'll meet all people that Many came into his long long life. he loved and have had marked in his long live. He loved them all. Whether adults, or children, all of them surrenderred to his tender and charm and tenderness.  His patient look, and his the incredible capacity to listen, and his kindred presence is are enough to make us all feel relax, wisdom, friendship wise, friendly and comfortable."

 

Your content is too delicious to pass up.  So I corrected/edited in a different manner.

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Henry N. Brown

I’m the world’s citizen/a citizen of this world, but I was born in Bath in July 16 of 1921, when my second eye was knitted by Alice. My name is Henry N. Brown and I’m a Teddy Bear. But I’m not just a common teddy bear. Alice put a secret inside of me, that secret it´s is called “love”, and makes me special, different. Now I have 80 year and I’m not the preferred children's toy anymore. I let convince myself be convinced by my editor to tell my story.

Through this teddy bear's innocent eyes, we assist to witness(?) the events most significant events of the 20th century: the American dream, the second world war, the hippy movement, and right up to now.

From the hand of this incredible witness, a Teddy Bear able to see and to hear, and his several owners, we travelled to Europe, We'll meet all people that he loved and have had marked affected in his long life. Adults, children, all of them surrender to his tender and charming/beguiling look appearance and his incredible capacity to listen. His presence is itself enough to make us feel relaxed, and find wisdom, friendship and comfort .

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Henry N. Brown

I’m a world’s citizen, but I was born in Bath in on July 16 of 1921, when my second eye was knitted by Alice. My name is Henry N. Brown and I’m a teddy bear. But I’m not common teddy bear. Alice put a secret inside of me; that a secret it´s called “love”. And it makes me special, different. Now I'm 80 years old and I’m not the prefer children toy anymore children's favorite toy anymore. I let convince myself by my editor to My editor convinced me to tell my story. 


Through this teddy bear's innocent eyes, we assist see/witness (assist would only be used if the teddy bear participated in these events!) to the events most significant of the 20th century: the American dream, the Second World War, the hippy movement up to now.

From the hand of this incredible witness, a teddy bear able to see and to (to is unnesccesary here) hear, and his several owners, we traveled to Europe  we'll travel though Europe. We'll meet all people that he loved and have had has marked in his long live life. Adults, children, all of them surrender to his tender and charming look and his incredible capacity to listen. His presence is enough to make us feel relaxed, as his his wisdom, friendship and comfort. (as his continues the motif of how his qualities, as well as his presence, relaxes us).


Cool story :-)

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Quimet, this is great! I love it!

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