Education

Hi, everybody! I want (would like) to speak about education. Education takes place not only at school or at university, but also at home in the form of self-education and self-development!
This is a very important topic for all humans.
An educated man must be knowledgable in order to succeed in life. If a man is interested not only in his own profession(я бы сказал "If a man has additional interests to his own work'), such a difference science and difference knowlege (Может быть, ты имела ввиду "different science". Поэтому я так напишу: "including a different branch of science or humanities"), that is good. These men can be a very smarter and literate in their own lives, and they can rise in society.
Benjamin Franklin said: "Investment in knowledge always pays the best interest." I think (запятая не ставится перед "that". Она ставится в русском перед "что".) that is quite a big big perfect! (really great). That is true.
Therefore, I am interested in all counties, cultures, languages, architecture, religions, music, sports, business (especially finance), forex market and philosophy - those are my passions! I love them.
In the future, I wish be wish to be a very successful woman.
What do you think of quote Benjamine Frankline??? Ben Franklin's quote?

Я полностью согласен с Беном по этому поводу — мне грустно видеть, что среди моих сверстников это все меньше и меньше оценивают. И, насчет образования - я тоже убеждён, что получить образование можно без школы. В моей семье, мы учились дома и каждый из нас нашел свои интересы. Например, я начал изучать русский самостоятельно. Никто в школе не мог этому верить.

I agree completely with Ben Franklin – it saddens me to see the attitude of my peers towards education. In regards to education – I am convinced that it is possible to educate oneself without school. My family homeschooled for many years, and my siblings and I found our own interests. For example, I took up Russian on my own. Nobody at school could believe that! 

Education

Everybody, I want would like to speak about education. Education Not only just the kind you can getin a school or university, but more rather self-education and self-development!
This is a very important topic for all human that everyone should take note of.
Educated men have a many over greater chances to be in successful to in life. If a man is interested in more than just his own profession, such as different sciences or difference other types of knowlege, that is good. Those These men can be a very much stronger and literate to own life, can be in and advance to the top on the of society.
Benjamin Franklin says: "Investment in knowledge always pays the best interest." I think, that is quite a big big perfect very well said and that is true.
Therefore I`am I'm interested in all counties (I think you mean countries), cultures, languages, architecture, religions, music, sports and business (especially finance, forex market and philosophy)  that This is my passion! I love it.
At In the future I will be wish hope to be a super successful woman.
What do you think about the Benjamin Franklin quote ???

good overall, but you tend to forget the verb "to be" very frequently, so watch that. an example of this can be found in the phrase: "that good" here it is very important to say "that is good".

I have tried to correct any errors, while rephrasing everything so that it sounds more natural. Some of your phrases I couldn't understand very well, so I made my best attempt in order to edit.