feeling poetic time flows, it goes by effortlessly moves us erodes our purpose sometimes goads us vexes us implodes our senses never beginning never ending the passage of time i grasp

Karina

feeling poetic time flows, it goes by effortlessly moves us erodes our purpose sometimes goads us vexes us implodes our senses never beginning never ending the passage of time i grasp it seize it try to shake it mold it make it into something less ephemeral but it eludes me with every turn every time. is life so senseless? ----------- now the Norwegian version: tidens gang tid flyter, det går av uanstrengt beveger oss eroderer vår hensikt noen ganger egger oss irriterer oss implodes vår sanser aldri begynner aldri slutter jeg gripe den gripe det prøve å riste det gjøre det forme det til noe mindre flyktig men det unnvike meg med hver sving hver gang. er livet så meningsløst?

การแก้ไข · 2

Merk, jeg er ingen poet.

tidens gang

tiden flyter,
den går
uanstrengt forbi
beveger oss
noen ganger visker den bort vår hensikt
egger oss
irriterer oss
imploderer våre (har ikke hørt dette brukt slik, men dette er jo poesi)
sanser
begynner aldri
slutter aldri
tidens tann ("the passage of time" er kanskje tittelen som havnet her ved en feil?)

jeg tar tak i den
griper den
prøve å riste den
forme den
gjøre den
til noe
mindre flyktig
men den unnviker meg ved hver sving (vurder: ved hver korsvei)
hver gang.

er livet så meningsløst?

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