visit a grave
I went to go visit a grave today.
There is who my grandmother rest.
It is too noisy for me that the chirp of a cicada.
今日はお墓参りに行きました。
そこには、私の祖母が眠っています。
蝉の鳴き声が、とてもうるさかったです。
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You already have a great correction, but I thought I would have a try too.
visit a grave
Visiting the Grave
I went to go visit a grave today.
I visited a grave today.
There is who my grandmother rest.
It is where my grandmother rests.
It is too noisy for me that the chirp of a cicada.
The chirp of the cicadas drowned out everything.
I really like your story. It feels very poignant, and poetic.
I went to a grave.
It is here my Grandma rests.
Summer cicadas.
That is my poor attempt at making a haiku of your idea.
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Visiting A Grave
I went to visit a grave today, where my grandmother rests.
The chirp of cicadas broke the silence there.
今日はお墓参りに行きました。
そこには、私の祖母が眠っています。
蝉の鳴き声が、とてもうるさかったです。
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