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ENVIRONMENT Environment has to be conserved. This is a responsibility everybody must accept. The contamination of cities is already a problem the people shouldn´t ignore. The greenhouse effect is causing serious consequences for the persons and environment. I think the government don´t say to people what is really the situation. While the businesses and industries don´t stop to contaminate, the pollution is greater. If the businesses and industries will use renewable energy the contamination will reduce considerably. But this don´t interest their boss. This is a serious problem for the society. Most the people think about what they can do. Some people often decide do nothing. Only a few people recycle and they have healthy habits to made better world.

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THE ENVIRONMENT

The environment has to be conserved. This is a responsibility everybody must accept.
The contamination of cities is already a problem that people shouldn't ignore. The greenhouse effect is causing serious consequences for people and the environment. I think the government doesn't say to people what the situation really is.
Beacause the businesses and industries won´t stop contaminating resources, the pollution increases. If the businesses and industries will use renewable energy the contamination will be reduced considerably. But this doesn´t interest their bosses. This is a serious problem for society.
Most the people think about what they can do. Some people often decideto do nothing. Only a few people recycle and they have healthy habits to make better world.

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