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The end of the holidays People usually make a list with goals, challenges and proposals when a new year starts. I like to revise that list after summer because I still organize myself with the academic calendar, so, since September began, I have been figuring out how I am going to spend my time during the months coming. This task is being hard because I want to do many things but just after holidays I feel a bit lazy. I guess that is normal. On the other hand, I am excited for everything hoping that they will be helpful to me in the future. The process of organizing can also be painful because I need to be really honest to myself and point out all the mess and mistakes I made the latest months in order to make the right choices to change my schedule. Now it is time to be responsible! :)

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The end of the holidays

People usually make a list with goals, challenges and proposals when a new year starts. I like to revise that list after summer because I still organize myself with according to the academic calendar, so, since September began, I have been figuring out how I am going to spend my time during the months coming.

This task is being hard because I want to do many things but just right after the holidays I feel a bit lazy. I guess that is normal. On the other hand, I am excited for everything hoping that they will be helpful to me in the future.

The process of organizing can also be painful because I need to be really honest to with myself and point out all the mess and mistakes I made over the latest months in order to make the right choices to change my schedule.


Now it is time to be responsible! :)

 

Great job. My only doubt is about "they" (highlighed in blue). Can you rephrase the sentence?

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It's written very well, and I have nothing to correct. :)

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