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MY DAILY HABITS My daily habits are different as before time because I´m unemployed three months ago. I spend my time looking for a job at present times and I´m also studying English. I´m taking some courses of my profession which I couldn´t take before because I didn´t have got free time. I had always been working as a psychologist. When I was working, I woke up at 7.00 am o´clock and I had to drive for one hour to my work´s place. I arrived to home at 7.00 o´clock and I was very tired, nevertheless I tried going out to walk or swim. Nowadays, I often go to swimming, I visit my sister, I hear music and I play a role in a theatre play in my spare time. I usually walk with my boyfriend and we go the friend´s parties on weekend. We like going to museum, theatre and concerts too. I wish I begin to work soon. If I work again I will continue paying my English class. As well as I will feel more happy than at this moment.

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MY DAILY HABITS

My daily habits are different as before time because I´m now that I have been unemployed for three months ago. I spend my time looking for a job at present times and I´m also studying English. I´m taking some courses of related to my profession which I couldn´t take before because I didn´t have got free time.


I had always been working as a psychologist. When I was working, I woke up at 7.00 am o´clock and I had to drive for one hour to my work´s workplace. I arrived to home at 7.00 pm o´clock and I was very tired, nevertheless I tried going out to walk or swim.


Nowadays, I often go to swimming, I visit my sister, I hear listen to music and I play a role act in a theatre play in my spare time. I usually walk with my boyfriend and we go the friend's parties on at weekends. (can also say "at the weekend") We like going to museums, the theatre and concerts too.
I wish I could begin to work again soon. If I work again I will continue paying my English class. As well as I will feel more happier than at this moment.

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My Daily Habits - a different version

My habits have changed since I became unemployed three months ago. These days, I spend time looking for a job and I am also studying English. In addition, I am taking some professional courses which I had no time to follow when I was working.

 

I have always worked as a psychologist and when I was employed, I woke at 7.00 am and had to drive for an hour to my workplace. I used to get home at 7.00 pm and although I was usually very tired I tried to go for a walk or a swim.

 

Nowadays, I often go swimming, visit my sister, listen to music and take part in amateur dramatics in my spare time. I usually go walking with my boyfriend and we go to friends’ parties at the weekend. We also enjoy going to museums, the theatre and concerts.

I wish I could begin working again. I would be able to continue paying for my English classes and I would also feel happier than I do at present.

 

My second version has taken more liberties with your text to make it sound more fluent


Note that there is no need to use "o'clock" if saying "am." or "pm."

 

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