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holiday our holiday is in Eid . its one week long and we want travel far away , so we are travel by plan . we are need to get a visa and change mony . we need to make a hotel reservation . we need a camera to talk photos Many people said 'marrakesh is charming , safe,old ,beautiful and exciting , but its crowded and noisy I think, we will leave on 15th and come back on 20th. i am going with my friends. In marrakesh, we are going to stay in holiday in a hoteal . it's nice hotel and it,s not far from the sog. one first day, we want to see the city by airship . after that , we will take a bus tour to see the city.Next day , we are going to visit museum . we will try local food . we are going to visit a local market .At night , we are going to the cinema .Thired day we are going to marrakesh restaurant and we can listen to traditional music . i think the food realy good . we are going to arts festival .Last day , we're going to shopping, so we want take presents for relative and neighbour . I hope we'll have a great time and lots of fun

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our Our holiday is in Eid. its It's one week long and we want will travel far away, so we are travelling by plan plane.
we We are need to get a visa and change mony money. we We need to make a hotel reservation. we We need a camera to talk take photos.
Many people said 'Marrakesh is charming , safe, old ,beautiful and exciting, but its it's crowded and noisy."

I think, we will leave on the 15th and come back on the 20th. i I am going with my friends. In Marrakesh, we are going to stay in holiday on vacation (?) in a hoteal hotel . it's It's a nice hotel and it,s it's not far from the sog (?).

one On the first day, we want to see the city by airship (plane?). After that , we will take a bus tour to see the city. The next day, we are going to visit museum. We will try local food . We are going to visit a local market. At night , we are going to the cinema (movie theatre). The third Thired day we are going to Marrakesh restaurant and we can listen to traditional music. I think the food realy is/will be really good. We are going to an arts festival. On the last day, we're going to go shopping, so because we want to take/bring presents back for relatives and neighbours.
I hope we'll have a great time and lots of fun!


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