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Leonor's notebook entry: Apr 19, 2010 infelizmente o tempo de hoje ainda não está nada de bom. pouco sol, bastante vento, demasiado humildade. aiaiaiai já estamos em abril! será que esta primera Shanghai enlouquece-se??? quero que chegue o meu verãozinho...

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Infelizmente o tempo hoje ainda não está nada bom. (I wouldn't use the two "de" here)

Pouco sol, muito vento, demasiada humidade. (I replaced "bastante" by "muito", but it's just because it's usually used in opposition with "pouco". Both "bastante" and "muito" are okay though. "Humidade" is a female noun so it has to be "demasiada".)

Aiaiaiai! Já estamos em Abril! Será que esta Primavera de Shanghai enlouqueceu? Quero que chegue o meu verãozinho...

You have a nice tone, despite those minor corrections it sounds pretty natural. Keep up the good work!
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Infelizmente o tempo de hoje ainda não está nada de bom. Pouco sol, bastante vento, muita humidade. Aiaiaiai já estamos em abril! Será que esta primavera de Shanghai enlouqueceu? Quero que chegue o meu verãozinho...

As my friend said, you sound naturally and have a good proficiency.
Bom trabalho ^^

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