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A Composition
l read a book which was wrote by Chai Jing, a famous news host working for CCTV. The name of this book is <seeing>. The content is about experiences that she experienced when she interviewed others in the program. She sorted her experiences and added her comments into this book.
l bought this book from internet . l knew others had given a high praise before l read it. When l received this book, l didn't read it at once, l looked through the index and the photos, then l found l did fall in love with this book. Because l found his writing was artless and content related to the daily life.
What this book left a deep impression on me was about the topic of environmental pollution. There were many chemical factories in her hometown, she risked her life to interview the director of factory and Environment Protection Agency. She wrote the story about how she took the evidences about pollution when the camera was concealed and something that was not easy to be seen by our common people.
At last, she commented this thing from a special and proper view, which made readers easy to understand where the real problem is and we should how to solve this problem.
l am going to read this book again. l hope l can gain another feeling that differs from my first time.
l hope you can correct my composition.
Thanks.
(a) You found the writing ARTICULATE, not ARTLESS.
(b) If you refer to the author as a female, SHE, do not afterward refer to the author as a HE.
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