First note book entry: Introducing myself I speak mandarin Chinese and I'm now a junior student in English major . Like many Chinese students, I'm in great need to improve my English level. I'm the k

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First note book entry: Introducing myself I speak mandarin Chinese and I'm now a junior student in English major . Like many Chinese students, I'm in great need to improve my English level. I'm the kind of person who talks a lot, any topic is ok. Although some friends around me think I'm serious , I regard myself as enthusiastic most of the time. Hope to be friends with you, either to improve language level or to share some stories.

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Really nice job writing your first entry! Here are a few corrections! Some of them may be optional, but I think the wording is a little better:

First Notebook Entry: Introducing Myself (Generally, I would capitalize the title of an entry.. not necessary though)

I speak mandarin Chinese and I'm now a junior majoring in English. Like many Chinese students, I greatly wish to improve my English. I'm the kind of person who talks a lot, any topic is ok. Although some friends around me think I'm serious, most of the time I regard myself as enthusiastic.
Hope to be friends with you, either to improve language level or to share some stories.

I would be happy to help you practice your English.. at anytime :^)

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