Conor 陈梁
Cafe em Brasil Eu lei uma texto sobre no consumisimo do Cafe no Brasil onde se tomam diaremente. Muitos Brasileiros tomam ate cinco xicaras. As criticas acreditam isso pra problemas de Saude que existem. Principalmente que cafe provoca insonia e amerala de dentes Certo que seria aconselhavel a evitar cafe quando voçe tem problemas determinadas, porem Cafe tem produz varios substancias protetoras que podem evitar cancar. Se voce puder consumir ate 5 xicaras e ter uma dieta balenceada com exerxicio, pode diminuir peso e outros problemas fisicais.
4 ก.พ. 2014 เวลา 13:07
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Café em no Brasil

(Eu) lei li uma um texto sobre no consumisimo do café no Brasil onde se tomam /bebem diaremente.
Muitos brasileiros (só se usa letra maiúscula se referimos-nos ao povo) tomam /bebem até cinco xícaras /chavenas. As Os criticos acreditam que isso pra causa problemas de para a saúde que existem. Principalmente que o café provoca insónias e dentes amerala amarelos de dentes.

Certo que Seria aconselhável a evitar café quando (você /tu) tem /tens certos problemas. determinadas Porém o café tem produz várias substâncias protectoras que podem evitar cancar o cancro. Se (você / tu) puder / puderes consumir até 5 xícaras /chavenas e ter uma dieta balenceada equilibrada com exerxicio exercício, pode /podes diminuir peso e evitar outros problemas fisicais físicos.

 

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9 กรกฎาคม 2015
Conor, drinking coffee is good mostlyin the winter and I agree that depends on the person can be harmful but in general it doesn´´t cause any problems.I like it very much. Silvio
10 กรกฎาคม 2015
thank you Sophia for the feedback, I have been to Portugal and the coffee there is indeed delightful.
10 กรกฎาคม 2015
It's also very common in Portugal people drink a lot of coffee. InPortugal we have a very good coffee isn't like the USA, the Americans drink in a very huge cup and we call it "bathtub" because it's very big and looks water.
9 กรกฎาคม 2015
We loke coffee! In my house we prepare it like 5 times in a day!! It's part of our culture!
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