Happy Valentines day for (to) every one, and Happy Love for all of us may we all have love in our lives!(Please,correct my numerous mistakes

Once upon a time, a Yang young man decided to get married.
He came to his father to get his blessing.
At that moment, his Father was sitting in the garden, full of thoughts, and was drawing with twig something on in the sand with a twig.

The Son approached him and said:
 "Father, I had have met a Wwonderful girl, and I want to get married to her." Not technically wrong, but a more fluid way of saying this would be "I want to marry her.".

The Father remained silent, he just drawn drew the sign of a zero on the ground.

"Father, Sshe is an amazing housewife."

But However, his father drawn (just or simply or only) drew another Zero on in the sand.

The yang young man listed a lot of other dignities of the girl. (There are a few things here. First, the noun takes possession first. Therefore, if you wanted to keep the same sentence, it would read "The young man listed a lot of the girl's other dignities". The problem with this sentence, is that even when it is grammatically correct, it is still awkward. The word "dignity" isn't really used in english to describe quality but rather indicates the presence of a title (i.e. princess, prince, king, etc.). I would reword the sentence to say "The young man mentioned many of the girl's other qualities to his father." 

In respond response, his father kept drawing a zero.

At last, the boy said "we love each other." 

Only after that those words did the wise father drawn draw the sign of a Oone in front of all of those zeros.

Only love can increas all good qualities in thoudands times! (I'm not sure what you're saying here, but if you want to keep the sentence as you wrote it, it would be written "Only love can multiply all good qualities a thousand times!"

Overall, very well done. You are writing in english about topics that are not easily discussed, so you should be proud of yourself for accurately telling an abstract story. Keep it up!

I wish Big love for every one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Happy Valentines day for everyone and Love for all of us!

Once upon a time, a Yang man decided to get married.
He came to his father to get seeking his blessing.
At that moment, his father was sitting in the garden, full of thought, and was drawing something with twig, in the sand. 

The Son approached him and said, "Father, I have met a wonderful girl. I want to get married to marry her."

The Father remained silent, he just drew the sign of a 'zero' on the ground.

"Father, she will be an amazing housewife."

But, his father drew another 'zero' in the sand.

The Yang man listed a lot of her other dignities [good qualities] of the girl. In response, his father kept drawing 'zero'.

At last, the boy said, "We love each other."

Only after those words did the wise father draw the sign of a 'one' in front of all those zeros.

Only love can increase all good qualities a thousand-fold! times!

I wish Big Lots of love for [to] everyone !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Happy Valentine's day for every one to everyone and Happy love for to us all of us!(Please,correct my numerous mistakes)

Once upon a time, a Yang young man decided to get married. He came went to his father to get his blessing. At that moment his Father was sitting in the garden, filled with of thoughts, and was drawing with twig something in the sand with a twig.

As the son approached him, he and said, 

"Father, I had met a wonderful girl. I want to get marryied to her." [This is how a man should be saying.  A woman, on the other hand would express it as, "I would like to get married to him".  This is cultural bias, the man uses the active form while the woman should use the passive way.]

The father remained silent but he just drawn the sign of a zero on the ground instead.

"But father, she is will be an amazing housewife!" 

But Still his father drawn drew another zero on the sand. [understood!]

The young man began listing a lot of other dignities the rest of the girl's qualities. In respond his father However, the old man kept on drawing putting zeroes out.

At last Finally, the boy said: "We love each other." 

Only after that words the wise father drawn the sign of One in front of all those zeros. /With that/Upon hearing those words/Instantly/ the father placed a one in front of the zeroes.

Only love can increase enhance all good qualities in a thousands times fold!

I wish Big true love for everyone every one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story!