My Formal Essay

When I was in High School, I likeed to spend my free time on something that could later on could change my life: for example, video games, especially about World War 2. I learned a lot about the history, the politics, and all other affairs that later on led me to a pile of books on of WWII and other international issues. Since then, I have wanted to be a diplomat, so and the next day, I found myself delving delved into on to some German’s books. So thus my language stories began.

Though my German and Japanese (designated subject in second year of high school) was neglected as soon as I finished my high school, my language journey began once again in my second year of university. It was my second choice to take an Accounting major instead of my first, International Relations. It was Quite much of a hurdle going that I’ve been through with my study, especially during on my second year. But in the end I overcame the could settled down some adversities that i'd I’ve gone through before and finished my study on time.

Korean is the my turning point in escalating my interest from hobby into passion of on language learning. Despite my lack of Korean speaking ability for these past 3 years, I had been trying and combining my own method of study so the tiring yet valuable process would notwas quite hold me back in a little to advancing with my Korean, but eventually I have grasped the core of the language core pretty well good. The outcome of all that process is that, Korean has is become my first language, that and I have fallen fell in love.

This was a pretty complex topic, but you a did really good job of getting your points across. Remember to use the correct tense for the situation. e.g 'Has' instead of 'is'

Keep practicing and you will continue to do well! Good luck!