People who could be trust and who couldn't be

People that are involved with each other communicate, socialize, and build a relationship. They do this in order to maintain their lives or to fulfill their needs so they don't have to live alone.  on the ground that no body could live alone. And Then, they become friends with each other. A friend is a reliable person who can be trusted, who we can rely on, who could can be the place to go when we want to cry, and keeps our secrets. However, not all of them is are true friends. They only want to take something until there is nothing left to be taken from us, and then they would go away to find another "victim". And Yet, i think no one could can identify these kind of people early when we are about to make a relationship. It is true in friendship and romantic relationships, we have to be a bit careful in choosing this friend.

a few pointers for you:

-do not start a sentence with the word "And"

-make sure to keep your tenses the same.

Keep up the good work!

People who can be trusted and who can't be

People involved with each other communication, socialize and build a relationship in order to maintain their lives or to fulfill their needs on the ground that nobody wants to live alone. And then, they become friends with each other. A reliable person who can be trusted, who we can relied upon, who could be the shoulder where we want to cry, and who can keep our secrets. However, not all of them are true friends; they only want to take something until there is nothing left to be taken from us, and then they would go away to find another "victim". And yet, I think no one can identify these kind of people early on when we are about to make a relationship. It is true in friendship and romantic relationships; we have to be a bit careful in choosing our "friends".

Very good and very true!