Barbara
Some stuff about me. So my name is Barbara and I'm from Argentina. I'm 14 years old and I'm looking forward to improve my English and maybe learning a bit of French. I really enjoy reading, writing, watching videos and everything related to English, so probably that's why I learnt a few things that I didn't at school. Since I have to describe something to make this longer, I'm going to tell you what kind of music I'm into. The bands that I like are mostly from England, I love their music and culture! My favourite band is Oasis, but I also like Rolling Stones, Aerosmith, AC/DC, Arctic Monkeys, Jake Bugg, Lana del Rey, Marina and The Diamonds, Sky Ferreira, Nirvana, The Neighbourhood and The 1975, among others. If we're talking about books, then I have to say that I love reading. Some of the titles in my library are Wuthering Heights, Jane Eyre, Pride and Prejudice, Sense and Sensibility, The 1,000,000 Bank Note, The Prince and The Pauper and so on. I'd be glad to read your comments. Thank you so much for reading this.
19 เม.ย. 2014 เวลา 3:30
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I don't really have much to say about what you wrote, it was basically perfect :) the only comment that I have is about "learnt", if you're learning British English, then there's nothing wrong with it, it seems that you like England, so it's probably fine, but according to American English it's preferred that you write "learned". Either word is technically fine though.
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