Oh My English

I'm currently studying in University in Business Computing at University. Right now I'm doing my proposal for my Final Year Project. And My examiner said that I need to improve my writing and also my grammar. This comment make made me feel down because I don't didn't know how to improve my writing until I found italki. It like gave me a second chance to breathe and at the same time gives me strength to improve my english. Because of if i'm having difficulties in english either in writing or conversation, it makes me down and my self confident is also lost. Actually i'm really envious with of people around me who can speak in english fluently. Right now to improve my english i always lesson listen to english songs to study their pronunciation. And actually i have (had?) a dream where I wanted study in at Cambridge University to learn english language very deep more in depth. But i don't know that if my dream will become true of or if it is just a day dream only. But i don't care because i believe one day i will become a Cambridge student. So don't give Norsha (?).... =)

Oh My English
I'm currently studying at a University for Business Computing. Right now I'm doing my proposal for my Final Year Project. My examiner /professor said that I need improvement in my writing and also my grammar. This comment made me feel down because I didn't know how to improve my writing until I found italki. It's like it gave me a second chance to breath and at the same time gave me strength to improve my English. Because I'm having difficulties in English, both in writing and in conversation, it makes me down and my self-confidence is also lost. Actually, I'm really envious of people around me who can speak in English fluently. Right now to improve my English, I always listen to English songs to study their pronunciation. Also, I have a dream of one day studying at Cambridge University to learn the English language very well. But I don't know if my dream will come true or just be a daydream. But I don't care because I believe one day I will become a Cambridge student. So don't give up.
Norsha.... =)

Oh My English

I'm currently studystudying in University infor Business Computing. Right now I'm doing my proposal for my Final Year Project. And, and my examiner said that I need to improve my writing and also my grammar. This comment makemade me down sad (/unhappy) because I don't didn't know how to improve my writing until I found italki. It like gives me a second chance to breath and at the same time give me strength to improve my english. Because of i'm having difficulties in english either in writing or conversation, it makes me down sad and hurts my confidence my self confident also loss. Actually i'm really envious with of people around me who can speak in english fluently. Right now to improve my english i always lesson listen to english songs to study their pronunciation. And , and actually i have a dream where I want study in Cambridge University to learn english language very deeply. But i don't know that my dream will become true,  of maybe just a day dream only. But i don't care because i believe one day i will become Cambridge student. So don't give Norsha.... =)

I enjoyed your essay, Never give up! your English is good, a few errors but you got your point across and that's what's important. Most of those people you see speaking fluently were at your level once, remember that. Good luck with your studies.