One day in my Country (Venezuela) There is a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. Does not matter. There a many beautiful places, beachs, mountains. The life is very

เข้าสู่ระบบ

ลงชื่อเข้าใช้

María Daniela

One day in my Country (Venezuela) There is a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. Does not matter. There a many beautiful places, beachs, mountains. The life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but i love Venezuela.

24 ก.ค. 2014 เวลา 22:28

การแก้ไข · 2

About my Country (Venezuela)

There are a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. But it does not matter. There are many beautiful places, beaches, and mountains. Life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but I love Venezuela.

Hola Maria! Michael was perfect with his corrections. I think you both missed this tiny correction. 99% of the time you do not put a comma after a Conjunction. And never one before and one after.

( ,but, )

Otherwise, great Job!

Rob

24 กรกฎาคม 2014

About my Country (Venezuela)

There are a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. But it does not matter. There are many beautiful places, beaches, and mountains. Life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but I love Venezuela.

<em>Bien hecho!, Michael</em>

24 กรกฎาคม 2014

ต้องการความก้าวหน้าที่เร็วขึ้นหรือไม่

เข้าร่วมชุมชนแห่งการเรียนรู้และทดลองใช้แบบฝึกหัดฟรี!