Movies

Last weekend I saw 2 movies. They both were directed by Chinese directors - the first one is was by a director named one named Tiny time and the is called another one named The Continent. The first one was great seemed gorgeous, but it was just for fun - it didnt have a deeply meaning. The second one seemed boring, but provoked a little afforded for thought.

Good!

-You have issues with articles. 

-You <em>don't</em> put a space before a comma

-When you are linking two clauses of a sentence together do <em>not</em> use a comma - it's far better to use a conjunciton. 

-Use a comma <em>before</em> but

-Be careful with what tesne you're writing in