Andrey
# chapter 1 I have learned that my level is enough for traveling and i will travel to another countries in the future because i want meet people from another country: )
31 ก.ค. 2014 เวลา 7:20
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# Chapter 1

I have learned that my level is good enough for to traveling and I am going to will travel to another countries in the future because I want to meet foreign people. from another country: )

31 กรกฎาคม 2014

# chapter 1

I have learned that my level is enough for traveling and I will travel to another countries in the future because I want to meet people from another country: )

 

Well done!... just two things:

- You have to write "I" always with capital letter

- The word "anoher" is used with singular nouns, for example "another country", but if you want to use a plural noun, then you have to use "other"

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