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My favorite fruit
Malaysia is in middle of the durian season of durian at the moment. You can see that it is sold/it on sale everywhere, wherever (you really don't need both everywhere and wherever, wherever will do) you go. Yesterday my husband brought back 2 big packets(?)/parcels/bundles (surely they don't sell durian in packets, just wrap them securely) of durian home. However he did not eat any at all, as he cannot bear the/its smell of it. But I love it very much and since all my children are staying in the student dormitories, therefore (we tend to use 'therefore' quite rarely, it being formal, so since is preferable I feel) I ate the durian alone. Since (Because I used since last sentence!) It was so delicious, that I ended up eating too much without realizing it!
There are no real errors except 'brought', just suggestions ...
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