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What I do every day Usually I get up at 7 o`clock. I like to get up earlier, because than I have enough time for my obligations and too for relaxes. I`m never skip breakfast and I usually have breakfast at home or if I`m in hurry on university, I have breakfast in some bakery. My classes are not in some time. Sometimes they are finished earlier, but sometimes not. When I have a break, then I have lunch. When I come back home I have a little relax, then I study. In the evening I have a little exercise. I dance in one folklore group. And I usually go to bed at 11:30p.m. o`clock.

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What I do every day (or My daily routine)

Usually I get up at 7 o`clock. I like to get up early because then I have enough time for my obligations (see below) and also to relax. I never skip breakfast and I usually have it at home or, if I`m in a hurry, at university. (I have breakfast in some bakery. - see below) My classes are not always at the same time. Sometimes they finish earlier, but sometimes they do not. When I have a break, then I have lunch. When I get back home, I have relax a little and then I study. In the evening, I have exercise a little. I enjoy dancing in a folk group. And I usually go to bed at 11:30p.m. o`clock.

Well done. I have corrected the punctuation too so look for this. A few points:

"obligations" makes sense but does not sound natural.  "duties" sounds better but you would normally also say what kind of duties e.g. household duties. Or you might mean "housework" or "chores".  

 

You gave two alternative places for breakfast - home or university.  I didn't then understand about having breakfast in a bakery - if that was another alternative place or a bakery at the university.  It is not common to have breakfast at a bakery.  You might have meant cafe or canteen.

 

Better not to start sentences with "And".  Sometimes native speakers do it to add impact but otherwise it doesn't look good.  All the best, Michael

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What I do every day

Usually I I usually get up at 7 o`clock. I like to get up earlier, because then than I have enough time for my obligations and to relax. too for relaxes. I`m I never skip breakfast. and I usually have breakfast at home or, if I`m in hurry, on university, I have breakfast in some bakery near the university. My classes are not in some time. Sometimes my classes they are finished earlier, but sometimes not. When I have a break, then I eat have lunch. When I come back home I have relax a little relax, then I study. In the evening I do have a little exercise. I dance in one folklore group. And I usually go to bed at 11:30p.m. o`clock.


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I usually get up at 7 o'clock. I like to get up earlier, because then I have enough time for my obligations and to relax. I never skip breakfast. I usually have breakfast at home or, if I'm in hurry, I have breakfast in some bakery near the university. Sometimes my classes  are finished earlier, but sometimes not. When I have a break, I eat lunch. When I come back home I relax a little, then I study. In the evening I do a little exercise. I dance in one folklore group. I usually go to bed at 11:30p.m. 

 

I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions. - Alicia

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What I Do Every Day

Usually I get up at 7 o`clock. I like to get up earlier, because then I have enough time for my obligations to do my chores and too for relaxes. I`m never skip breakfast and I usually have breakfast at home or if I`m in a hurry on at university, and sometimes I have breakfast in some a bakery.

My classes are not in some at fixed times. Sometimes they are finished early, but and sometimes not later. When I have a break, then I'll have lunch. When I come back get home I have a little relax a little, then I study. In the evening, I have a little exercise by I dancing in one a folklore group. And I usually go to bed at 11:30 p.m. o`clock. [we say 11:30 pm. We only use o'clock for exact hours - 5 o'clock, 11 o'clock etc.]

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