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The worst summer....
Hi guys,
This summer after 4 years we (I and my wife)* decided to go on a holiday (on) in July. In previous years (before) we always went (on) in August because we have two children and usually (on) in August we (haven't person) don't have anyone to leave them with. Instead this year we're (leaving on ... ...) bringing them to a summer camp. Anyway, after 4 years we went and we found a cold sea - the sea was (as) so cold that in(side it) the water, together with us there were (the) pinguins and polar bears...brrrr ... Then it (has) rained for tree days and (near all days) nearly every day there was wind - wind over twenty-five kilometers per hour(s).... I hope that next year we'll be more fortunate.
I'm sorry, I was forgetting.... We went to a little town (of North) in the northern part of Sardinia, where usually the sea and the weather are beautiful.
See you, bye.
Claudio
*"my wife and I" sounds a lot better. Usually we put the other people first in the list, eg "my friends and I". It sounds a lot smoother and it is also more polite.
The Worst Summer...
Hi guys,
This summer, after 4 years without a holiday, we (I and my wife and I) decided to go on holiday in July. Years before we would always went go in August because we have two children and usually in August we don't haven't person anyone to leave them with, instead this year we're leaving on going to a summer camp... [or do you mean going camping?] ... I don't know how to translate (centro estivo).
Anyway, after 4 years, we finally went and but what we found was a cold sea. The sea was as so cold that inside it, together us there it seemed like we were swimming with the penguins and polar bears... Brrrr... Then it has rained for three days and nearly all every days there was wind. Wind of over twenty-five kilometers per hour... I hope that next year we'll more fortunate.
I'm sorry, I was forgetting.... We went to a little town of in the North of Sardinia, where usually the sea and weather are usually beautiful.
See you, bye.
Claudio
The worst summer....
Hi guys,
this summer after 4 years we (I and my wife) decided to go holiday on July. Years before we always went on Agust because we have two children and usualy on Agust we haven't person to leave them, instead this year we're leaving on ... ... I don't know how to translate (centro estivo). Anyway, after 4 years we went and we found a cold sea, the sea was as cold that inside it, together us there were the pinguins and polar bears...brrrr ... Then it has rained for tree days and near all days there was wind, wind over twenty-five kilometer-hours.... I hope that next year we'll more fortunate.
I'm sorry, I was forgetting.... We went to little town of North of Sardinia, usually the sea and weather are beautiful.
The phrase you want is "summer camp"
See you, bye.
Claudio
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