Ysabel
Start the day I usually get up very early, but today I get up late because I´m ill and I have storache but I should to have work. I´m going to positive mind, I can do it!
21 ต.ค. 2014 เวลา 14:25
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Start the day

I usually get up very early, but today I got up late because I´m ill and I have a stomach ache, but I should still have to work.
I´m going to (keep a positive mindset/think positive thoughts), I can do it!

 

(Almost the same as Bree's correction but I added a couple extra alternatives for the last sentence). Feel better Ysabel!

22 ตุลาคม 2014

Start the day

I usually get up very early, but today I get got up late because I´m ill and I have storache (an ache/ a stomach ache?) but I should still have to have work.
I´m going to think positively mind, I can do it!

21 ตุลาคม 2014
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