Chelsea Tey
What if... What if I am a millionaire... What if I am a talented artist... What if I can sing well... What if I can speak English very well... There’s no such what-if thing, if you really want something, work hard for it =) And make it becomes a real thing!
21 ต.ค. 2014 เวลา 16:06
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What if...

What if I am a millionaire...
What if I am a talented artist...
What if I can sing well...
What if I can speak English very well...

There’s no such what-if thing, if you really want something, work hard for it =)
And make it becomes a real thing!

 

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Hi, Chelsea!  You are very wise.  I totally agree with you when you write: If you really want something, work hard for it.

 

Here are my corrections of your work:

 

What if...
What if I am a millionaire...

What if I were a millionaire ...
What if I am a talented artist...

What if I were a talented artist...
What if I can sing well...

What if I could sing...
What if I can speak English very well...

What if I could speak English very well...

 

You are using the Second Conditional Tense that we use when we want to talk about a situation that is not real -- things that you can imagine or dream.

 

The full sentence structure is:

IF + past simple tense + would

If I were a millionaire

or

If I was a millionaire ... I would travel around the world!

 

21 ตุลาคม 2014

What if...

What if I am were a millionaire...
What if I am were a talented artist...
What if I can could sing well...
What if I can could speak English very well...

There’s no such what-if thing, if you really want something, work hard for it =)
And make it becomes a real thing! make it comes true.

 

http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/subjunctive_mood.htm

 

I'm not native speaker and I'm learning too. but if I were you I will write like above :)

21 ตุลาคม 2014
Hi, Mumtaz... Thank you and I'm pleased that you love it! I searched for your "What if" topic. And I found that we both talk about chasing our dream! haha.. Great day =)
22 ตุลาคม 2014
I love what you wrote Chelsea,, funny that I've an entry with the same title "What If" (,")
21 ตุลาคม 2014
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