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In addition to the corrections previously made, I recommend:
It is a story about a cute boy, who . . .
The word "one" places emphasis on the fact that there is only one cute boy, not two, not three, etc. I think that such an emphasis is not necessary, because the exact number of cute boys in the movie is not important in the context of your post. Therefore, I think that "a cute boy" is a better suited phrase.
Examples:
Question: What's in the box?
Answer: There's a cake in the box.
Question: How many cakes are in the box?
Answer: There's one cake in the box.
As you can see, in the second example the emphasis is on the exact number. In the first example, that emphasis is absent.
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