IELTS Writing 2 practice (2) Space exploration Question: Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?

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IELTS Writing 2 practice (2) Space exploration Question: Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent? Answer: Exploring our universe is an inevitable trend among industrialized countries. Given that there exists hundreds of thousands known and mysterious resources which could be explored, it is a huge temptation to implement different costly approaches. However, we are already facing various kinds of disasters and diseases on our earth, so, is it really appropriate to spend huge on the outer space? The money is definitely worth investing, if it is concerning about the long term development for mankind. Under no circumstances could we escape from the extinction of disposable resources; especially fossil fuels like coals or oils; we should genuinely consider as many substitutes as possible. On the contrary, some may claim that adopting renewable energy like solar or wind energy could tackle the energy crisis, instead of making space exploration. Indeed, until now the technology level of those resources is not mature enough to meet the current gianormous demand. Thus, the energy difficulty seemingly may be only relieved by out-space resources in short run. Simultaneously, is that probable and appropriate to spend the whole majority funding on space, instead of our planet earth? Despite the fact that, countries, since roughly around the period of cold war, are participating in space competition to certain extent; it is generally argued that money should be spent on livelihoods, like income gap elimination or global staring alleviation. In my opinion, developed countries like USA or Germany should draft agreements on mutual-development on space resources, thus, a more balance on universe and earth issues could be attained, rather than competing endlessly on their knowledge and capital. To conclude, it is an extremely complex issue cannot be solved in short term. Running out of resource is definitely an urgent event, likewise, so as the environmental and social issues. Space is tend to be infinite, like the greed of human, I yearn for a more balanced accomplishment could be generated and agreed among countries for a more effective development, in order to achieve a better place to live.

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oh, forgot to say, merry christmas

25 ธันวาคม 2014

really thx for the help!! you are marvelous the test last for 1 hour total part 1 are suggested to spend 20 mins and part 2 (my works) are suggested to spend 40 mins I did them within 40 mins (though not very accurate and fluent, working on it) btw how s everything on your hong kong issues?

25 ธันวาคม 2014

How long do you have to write this in the exam? It has been a while since I helped someone with IELTS but this seems pretty long. I recall the writing part had two 30 minute sections.

24 ธันวาคม 2014

IELTS Writing 2 practice (2) Space exploration

Question:
Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?

Answer:
Exploring our universe is an inevitable trend among industrialized countries. Given that there exists may be hundreds of thousands of known and mysterious new resources which could be disovered explored, it is a huge temptation to implement different costly approaches to find them. However, we are already facing various kinds of disasters and diseases on our earth, so, is it really appropriate to spend huge amounts of money on space exploration huge on the outer space?

The money is definitely worth investing, if it is concerning we are concerned about the long term development for of mankind. Under no circumstances could we escape from the extinction of disposable resources; With the depletion of resources, especially fossil fuels like coals or oils, ; we should genuinely consider as many substitutes as possible. On the contrary, some may claim that adopting investing in renewable energy, like solar or wind energy, could tackle the energy crisis, instead of investing in space exploration. Indeed, until now the technology level of those resources is not mature enough to meet the current gianormous substantial demand. Thus, the energy difficulty seemingly may be only relieved by out-space resources disovered in outer-space in short run.

Simultaneously, is that probable and appropriate to spend the whole majority of funding on space, instead of on issues on Earth. our planet earth? Despite the fact that countries, since roughly around the period of Cold War, are participating have participated in space competition to certain extent; it is generally argued that money should be spent on global human development programs, such as reducing the income gap or the elimination of starvation. livelihoods, like income gap elimination or global staring alleviation. In my opinion, developed countries like the USA or Germany should draft agreements on mutual-development on space resources, thus, a more balanced approach to on universe and earth issues could be attained, rather than competing endlessly on their knowledge and capital.

To conclude, it is an extremely complex issue cannot be solved in short term. Running out of resources is definitely an urgent event, likewise, so as are the environmental and social issues. Spending vast sums of money on space exploration may help resolve our problems with finite resources on Earth but at the expense of human development programs. In either case, the money would be more wisely spent if major countries cooperated and pooled resources. Space is tend to be infinite, like human greed. the greed of human, I yearn for a more balanced accomplishment could be generated and agreed among more cooperation between countries for a more effective development, in order to achieve a better world in. place to live.