The My Intentions of  for the New Year

I miss the 2010 year passed.
2011 has come brought the new year.
I have studied English for five months..
I finds me that I already like the English language, because it helps me
recognize meet more foreign friends and lets me know learn more.
My English is poor, but I know and also believe that if I just keep studying, I will get better.

My New Year's wishes: I wish the people to who chat to me are in good health, and wish that my work will raise, and that I can improve my English level as soon as possible.
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Orange: article correction/required 
Green: capitalization 大写
Pink: required pronoun
Blue: vocabulary choice 语汇
Purple: verb choice/required 动词
Red: spelling 拼写
Gray: made plural 复数
Yellow: conjunction needed 连词
Strikethrough: 取代。不需要
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Your English is amazing for just 5 months! It looks like I offered many corrections, but they are very minor. Mostly, it is the lack of pronouns (that, I, who, etc) ^_^ Good luck~