Galina
little tangerine I remember yours New Years gifts. It is was no big festive paper bag. In is it was many tasty sweets. It is was brightly wrapper. How lots off was joy! Also was big flavour apple! But more joy was when I got out from magic bag a little orange overseas fruits! It is was tangerie! Only one , sometimes two or three but... A lot off children's joy! Here that remember from my childhood.
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little tangerine

I remember yours New Years gifts. It is was no big festive paper bag. In is it was many tasty sweets. It is was brightly wrapper. How lots off was joy! Also was big flavour apple! But more joy was when I got out from magic bag a little orange overseas fruits! It is was tangerie! Only one , sometimes two or three but... A lot off children's joy! Here that remember from my childhood.

 

Hi Galina!

Tы не нужна учиться слишком много других слов.Например: tangerine – возможно использовать–мандарин ( in English mandarin).

Here is correction:

I remember my New Years gift when I was little. It was in big and bright festive paper bag.  Many tasty sweets were inside. Also big tasty apple was there. It was a lot of joy! But I was very happy and surprised when I took out from this magic bag a little orange exotic fruit! It was tangerine. Sometimes one, sometimes two or three, but...What a lot of joy! This is how I remember my childhood.

Мне очень понравилась твоя статья. У меня такая самая память.Всего доброго с новым годом.

 

Eva

 

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