Informal e-mail about Christmas
How is it going? I hope all is well and you enjoyed the Christmas holidays in Canada.
As you know my family came from Merida to spend a few days with us. I was glad to see my cousins and the baby although you can guess what duties I had had, writing the letter, visiting Santa and the village’s nativity scene, helping with the preparation of those festive meals.
The most funny thing that happened during the holidays was a terrible mistake that the three wise men made. Imagine my niece opening her gift and getting a size 48 size shirt and my brother in law getting a Violeta’s book.
As I was laughing my head off my family thought that it was my fault. The problem was that while I had been browsing different items in the shop, the salesperson put the presents in the wrong bags.
Hope you come back soon, give me a buzz asap.
Lot of love (Ps Regards to your friends)
Well done.
Informal e-mail about Christmas
How is it going? I hope all is well and you enjoyed this the Christmas holidays in Canada.
As you know my family came from Merida to spend these some days with us. I was glad to be with my cousins and the baby although you can suppose guess what duties I had had, writing the letter, visiting Santa and the village’s nativity scene, helping in the preparation of these copious meals.
The most funny thing of these days was a terrible mistake that the three wise men did. Imagine my niece opening her gift and getting a size 48 size shirt and my brother in law getting a Violeta’s book.
How I was laughing one’s my head off, my familiar usual thought that it was my fault. The problem was that while I had been browsing different items in the shop, the salesperson put the post-it wrongly in the parcels I had paid bought.
Hope your you come back soon, give me a buzz asap.
Lot of love (Ps Regards to your friends)
My comments in red are corrections.
My comments in blue are suggestions to sound more natural.
Also "most funny" is perfectly OK but it os more common to say "funniest" in this context.
