A monument I've raised not built with hands... Я памятник себе воздвиг нерукотворный, К нему не зарастет народная тропа, Вознесся выше он главою непокорной Александрийского столпа. --------- My

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A monument I've raised not built with hands... Я памятник себе воздвиг нерукотворный, К нему не зарастет народная тропа, Вознесся выше он главою непокорной Александрийского столпа. --------- My translation I've made a monument for myself, The route to which will never be forgotten, And it rises it's insubordinate head, higher then the Alexandrian Pillar. ---------- Professional translation: A monument I've raised not built with hands, And common folk shall keep the path well trodden To where it unsubdued and towering stands Higher than Alexander's Column.

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I think the professional translater omitted an important point: себе возвиг.

Here are a few suggestions for your translation:

I've raised a monument to myself,
The path to which will never be forgotten,
And it raises its rebellious head
higher than the Alexandrian Pillar.

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