Sunday

on sunday morning, i learn english, I do homework with my friend so that i can have a good lesson (ok, or you could say ' do well in my lesson'). In the afternoon , I go out with my friend and we go fishing , go camping , go swimming. When I go home I see a beautiful screen (sounds odd - what kind of screen? A computer screen? Or do you mean scene or scenery?). I think it is very romantic with a lot of flowers. When i have free time I'll go there with my girlfriend. In the evening, i spend (spent is past tense) my time with my family.

Sunday

 sunday morning, i took a english lesson, I  finished homework with my friend.i has learnt a good lesson. In the afternoon , I went out with my friend and  caughted fish there , with accompanied of friends , went to swimming. When I returned back home I saw a beautiful screen . I thought  it was very romantic with lot of flowers. When i will have free time I'll go there with my girlfriend. In evening, i will spend remaing time with my family.