My favorite restaurant¡

I went with my family to "Terrace grill restaurat". The restaurant is very good. The food was delicious, but the service was terrible. My mother ate steak, mashed potatoes and grilled vegetables. She said that food was really good, but my sister did not like the meal. She ate onion soup, salad and cheescake. She said that the soup was too cold, and salad was bland, but she loved the dessert. For me the food was really good because my steak was juicy, the french fries were crunchy (I like crunchy food), the dessert was creamy and sweet enough. We drank red wine, It was fantastic . I loved the dinner!

it would be more eloquent to say: we ended the meal with red wine

Great job! I want to coorect just 1 thing :)

correct-grilled vegetables

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