Sara
Travelling I just come back from London.I liked it so much that next year I'm going to go to live there. In Italy I have a great job and a wonderful home but Italy is too close to me. So now it's the time to improve my english and change life
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Travelling

I just came back from London. I liked it so much that next year I'm going to go to live there.
In Italy I have a great job and a wonderful home, but Italy is too close to me.
So now it's the time to improve my english and change my life.

31 มีนาคม 2015
1

Travelling Traveling

I just came back from London. I liked it so much that next year I'm going to go to live there.
In Italy, I have a great job and a wonderful home, but Italy is too close to me.
So, now it's the time to improve my English and change my life.

 

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