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A LONG NIGHT
It was a could cold dark October night. James and Sarah were walking nervously in the countryside when suddenly a big bear went came out of a tree. They were face a to face with the big animal, but they could not run. Their legs were trembling with fear. When Sarah went out of recovered from the shock she grabbed the hand to James' hand and they started running by through the darkness. night Their faces were white as a paper.
Later, when they were sitting under a tree. James said: "Thanks Thank you Sarah" , and the answer of Sarah was answered with a smile and she said: " James, you are the most important thing in my life". They touched their hands, but the their fear was greater growing as with the minutes and hours ticked by. The sounds in of the night were getting stronger. these The sounds came from many very dangerous animals.
Their bodies were trembling with fear and the night has had not yet ended. end. They didn't know that the bear was still there, when and suddenly the bear it bit him James' hand, James He was very bad in trouble because he had lost a lot of blood. The bear disappeared because when he hear heard a shot. Sarah takes took off his James' jacket and put tied it in around his the injured hand of James to decrease hemorragea to stop the hemorrhaging.
The next morning, very early, are they were found by a rescue group, They who carry to took them James and Sarah to the hospital. ('carry' is only correct if they put them on a stretcher, or actually carried them.)
The doctor tells James that his hand will not have lose all mobility. James takes a few months to recover emotionally and succeeds with the help of Sarah Over a few months, with Sarah's help, he makes a full emotional, if not physical, recovery.
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