1 - Phrasal verbs ( pull away, let in )

- pull away

She is pulling away from me.
The rocket is pulling away from earth.
You are pulling yourself away from mountain.
I'm pulling myself away from 5th avenue right now

- let in

She finally let me in your house.
you are letting ['let in' doesn't make much sense here, perhaps use 'leading' instead, although this doesn't really mean the same thing] a brilliant career. 

You are letting [again 'let in' doesn't make much sense here - I'm not sure what you are trying to say, sorry] your mother city.
I changed  opened the windows to I let the sun in.

I hope my corrections make sense. :)

1 - Phrasal verbs ( pull awat, let in )

- pull away

She is pulling away from me.
The rocket is pulling away from earth.
You are pulling yourself away from mountain.
I'm pulling myself away from 5th avenue right now

- let in

She finally let me in your house.
you are letting a brilliant carrear. Change:
You are letting your mother city. Change: 
I changed the windows, then I let the sun in.Change:              Last : The poem can be enriched.