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The most embarrassing memory moment in my life (My most embarrassing memory) 

Up to the present (Up until now), I have had many memories.Some are good and some are bad. Among them, the most embarrassing moment took place at in grade 3 (in 3rd grade). In my childhood, I did not look like other girls. my hair was short cut cut short and I dressed like a boy. At that time  I was a brilliant student, but I alway played with boys. It was a gloomy morning. The sky was getting dark. My teacher asked us to stick around in class as stay in class because it was going to rain. I found it difficult to remain in class, so me and other boys the other boys and I decided to go out and played football under the gentle rain. The bell rang, we came back to class with wet clothes. Therefore, my teacher got angry at us and she punished us, by with a ruler, in front of my class. That The fact that I was the only girl in with/ apart of these disobedient kids was really made me feel ashamed.My face turned red and hot. As of yet,that is the most embarrassing childhood memory and I will never forget it.

Oh no! I think everyone is a little embarrassed by their 3rd grade self! :D Thank you for sharing.

The most embarrassing memory in my life

Up to the present, I have had many memories, some (are) good, some (are) bad. Among them, the most embarrassing moment took place in at grade 3. In my childhood, I did not look like other girls, my hair was short cut* and I dressed like a boy. At that time, I was a brilliant student, but I always played with boys. It was a gloomy morning, the sky was getting dark. My teacher asked us to stick around in class as it was going to rain. I found it difficult to remain in class, so me I and other some boys decided to go out, and played football under the gentle rain. The bell rang, we came back to class with wet clothes. (Therefore,) my teacher got angry at us and she punished us by with a ruler in front of my class. That I was the only girl in among these disobedient kids was really made me feel ashamed,my face turned red and hot. *As yet,that is the most embarrassing childhood memory, and I will never forget it.

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*Up to now