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Writing piece about what we should do when we don't know what we want. When we know exactly what we want we are able to set up objectives and make plans for realizing them. But when we don’t know what we want, what should we do? One day, I was wondering about that question, sitting on the frontyard’s ground of my house, when suddenly a cat appeared in the front gate. It seemed to be seduced by some smell and it was trying to find out where the smell was coming from. Quickly it noticed that the smell wasn’t comming from there and he went away still looking for it. In this day I got the answer that I was looking for. If we don’t know for sure what we want, we can at least follow interesting scents and see where they lead us to. But it is important to use our hearts and our true selves to decide which interesting scent we are going for.

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Writing piece about what we should do when we don't know what we want.

When we know exactly what we want we are able to set up ("establish" might be better) objectives and make plans for realizing them. But when we don’t know what we want, what should we do?

One day, I was wondering about that question, sitting on in the frontyard’s ground (or "on the ground of my frontyard) of my house, when suddenly a cat appeared in the front gate. It seemed to be seduced by some smell and it was trying to find out where the smell was coming from. Quickly, it noticed that the smell wasn’t comming from there and he went away still looking for it.

In this day I got the answer that I was looking for. If we don’t know for sure what we want, we can at least follow interesting scents and see to where they lead us to. But it is important to use our hearts and our true selves to decide which interesting scent we are going for.

 

Very well written. -S

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