Informal essay
Hi, everyone, nice to meet you!
Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through the italki. I know that my grammar exists the mistake, but failure is the mother of success, I believe that I can speak fluently English in the future. You can contact me if you want to exchange the language, I will teach you to learn mandarin.
Look forward to you!
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Informal essay
Hi, everyone, nice to meet you!
Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is Kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through (the) italki. I know that my grammar includes mistakes (exists the mistake,) but failure is the mother of success, I believe that I can speak English fluently (English) in the future. You can contact me if you want a language exchange, (to exchange the language,) I will teach you (to learn) mandarin.
Look forward to hearing from you!
Good start. Not too many grammar errors. Well written.
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why don't you get help from the teacher on the italki
ต้องการความก้าวหน้าที่เร็วขึ้นหรือไม่
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