Jose Garcia
last night I worked late las night , because I had a lot of work still outstanding I was working very hard when my boss teld me He said me that my work isn't good then I said him that I didn't finish still my job I was finishing my work while he was judging me at the end of day I showed my work he was satisfied
28 พ.ค. 2015 เวลา 5:53
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last night

I worked late last night because I had a lot of outstanding work 
I have been working very hard when my boss complained me that my work isn't good.
Then I told him that I haven't finished my job yet.
I was at middle of my work when he was judged me but
at the end of day I showed him my work and he looked satisfied.

28 พฤษภาคม 2015

Last Night

I worked late last night because I had a lot of outstanding work to complete.
I have been working very hard when my boss complained me that my work was not satisfactory.
I explained to my boss that I have not completed my work yet.
I was not finished with my work when my boss judged me but at the end of day I showed him my completed work and he was satisfied.

 

Ashkit's corrections are good, but I think the sentences above are better.

Good job Jose, and keep practicing!

28 พฤษภาคม 2015
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